This actually isn't too bad. I can see a bit of effort put into this.
Kind of funny when the alien yells right before he shoots the transport pod.
Not a bad start.
This is my first complete short
looks pretty shabby right
This actually isn't too bad. I can see a bit of effort put into this.
Kind of funny when the alien yells right before he shoots the transport pod.
Not a bad start.
cheers
thanks for watching mane
Hey! Good work.
I would say the strongest part of this piece was your sound design work.
The spaceship sounded like a spaceship, the error was far from erroneous, and the consternation of looming doom was perfect.
The low effort recorder music at the end really sealed in the chuckle from at the end.
I think with the sound work being as strong as it is, maybe look into animation techniques that require less effort if carried by music or sound effect.
So like flashing light effects, atmospheric and dark scenes, and possibly play with rotoscope like strobe effects.
really looking to more from you, and thank you for making this.
wow thank you for taking your time to watch, and critique. your words are appreciated and ill keep them in mind
a little shabby and voice acting needs work but comedic timing is on point.
thank you man, much appreciated