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The Fluvannian Diamond (2018)

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Somewhere in Fluvanna, Virginia, 2018: Platypus Elijah & Zombie Chick discover that a priceless blue diamond, known as "The Fluvannian Diamond" is missing from the jewelry store. The two weird but funny-looking freaks discover that the diamond was stolen by a trio of bandit animals and begin to sneak into their lair to steal the diamond back and bring the baddies to justice.


Written, Directed, Produced, & Animated by Elijah Woodson


Music by Max Lazenby


SOFTWARE USED

Anime Studio Pro 9.5

Toon Boom Harmony 17

Movie Studio Platinum 14


Copyright © MMXX by EJW STUDIOS LLC, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED


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There's potential. But you need to grow from here if you want to make that potential into something worth it. Your practical skills in anatomy, shading, exaggeration, all that, really need to improve. You have some understanding of expression though, I will say that.

However, I did enjoy small bits like the green weird guy and the expressions he makes.
And how you tried to give him character. Focus on him, make him a main stable and refine him. Because he's actually cool. And some of the other goofiness like the snake was alright. It's just more about making it something better.

Overall, I wish you luck. May you grow from here. Because you clearly put effort in, and I think you can make something greater with more practice.

This is pretty cool. There were a few parts that were extremely slow, to the point that I had to skip ahead. I'm not a pro in animation or anything, but it looks solid. It shows that you put some serious thought, and effort into this. The only issue I have is with the audio. The audio you used for this is atrocious. If you need custom ambient music/SFX, msg me or anyone else in the Audio Portal here on NG. There are plenty of talented musicians and audio engineers here that are always willing to help out. Apart from the audio, I dig it! Because of the audio, and how long some scenes drag on, I'd give it a [3.5] Since I don't know shit about animation, and it looks like you put some serious effort into this; it's a [4/5] from me. With better audio, and chopping up some scenes it could be [5/5] easy. Can't wait to see more animation from you!

Credits & Info

Views
435
Votes
71
Score
2.88 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 12, 2020
11:59 PM EST
Software
  • Toon Boom Harmony
  • Storyboard Pro
  • Anime Studio Pro