pretty cool
Noob try’s to “de-feet” pizza guy since both of them hate each other and decided to fight.
if you are one of my viewers from YouTube, you may find out that this version is way different it is compared to YouTube.
i kinda not like this because i don't have a proper mic and just use it without my mic. another is that i never had virtual money ever, plus i need to pay to remove the crappy watermark, i really don't know what to use to animate that i don't have to pay for, + im pretty young to be a good animator, im 11 years old. so i really don't like it very much. my life being an animator sucks, even a year ago my animating skills were worse.
youtube version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hbME3ndtgwo
pretty cool
lol its just good
cute character designs
REVIEW:
The animation itself is acceptable, but not something to write home about. It's very basic black and white line drawn animation like the ones seen in videos such as the ASDFMovie series.
It doesn't help that there's a FlipaClip watermark on the bottom left. Sadly, this is the best part about the video.
The worst part is the voice acting. The childish sounding voice here makes the whole thing sound very cringy, with a scream at 1:09 being the worst offender. I found myself having to skip past certain points of the video because I got tired of it very quickly. It also doesn't help that there isn't any subtitles on this video, so I can watch the thing in mute. There might be some on the YouTube version, but I wasn't able to find it.
The video focuses on a commonly overused joke where the meaning of the word 'defeat' is taken literally as 'de feet', where a person's feet (or legs) are taken away, 'de-feeting' them. However, it has been padded out with a 37 second long set-up that adds nothing to the overall joke.
SOME THINGS TO IMPROVE ON:
You are clearly not ready to voice anything, so try putting text to speech or subtitles in its place until you hit puberty. You also need to try and come up with better ideas to base your animations upon.
OVERALL:
Really hard to watch in all of its entirety. Best to skip to 0:37.