coal

pretty cool story. Grammar could be better though.

I died like 1st thing cause I couldn't grab the coal

This is cool for what it is and felt exactly as long as it should be. While the gameplay isn't challenging at all it does give you something to do while building tension - it's a way to "wait" without doing nothing at all.

The dialogue could use a revision or two, I noticed some spelling and grammatical errors that could have been avoided by getting another pair of eyes on the text. Some of the dialogue also felt a bit stilted. It's very difficult to write believable dialogue that also tells a story, but it goes a really long way towards creating an immersive experience.

Great job with the presentation! The audio and graphics helped the experience a lot, and it's impressive that you managed to put it all together in time for a jam.

!cool (hot) game!