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This is jeff

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a short love story, about jeff. trying to find love, as you do...

i spent a week making this, and i had soo much fun. its one of my first games, s opls be nice although, critique is appreciated alot.. enjoy:)

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Cute! Wish it had sound to kinda liven it up a bit. Like the overall look of it and how it just drops you in. Good intuitive flow to things overall.

You did a decent job capturing the feeling of a boring date XD, better luck next time Jeff... Jerry?

[editing to respond here] as Wolod noted earlier, Jeff’s name changes to Jerry in the last bits of dialogue, wasn’t sure if that was intentional or not

Bubbleking0923 responds:


довольно не плохо, хоть я и не любитель такого жанра, игра меня затягивает))

This is quite the impressive game for a week's worth of work! Like seriously, it would probably take me an entire month just to make all the art in here. Adventure games aren't really my cup of tea and I probably won't get much farther than the intro so I'll leave my 2 cents and get out of here. I absolutely love the mechanic you have set up for conversation and exploring items. I'm talking about the corridor you have to walk through at each of these interactions. They turn a simple adventure game into something much more unique and have me wanting to play just to see where you take that mechanic. Overall I think that is your golden chalice here. You can do a lot with that. Also the fact you have all the things you can interact with as a vibrant white make it much more accessible to the casual adventure game player.

My only main suggestion if I didn't miss it would be to add some sort of world map just so the player can keep track of where they are a bit better.

Hey there! Not bad for a short interactive story. Music and sound effects would be a nice addition though. Also Jeff transforms into Jerry in the last dialogue :D

Bubbleking0923 responds:

working on music currently ;)

I love the 8-bit style

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3.33 / 5.00

Sep 30, 2020
6:01 AM EDT
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