not to be mean but this is kind of not that good and i dont know how to tell you to improve considering im not experienced in 3d animation let alone normal animation.
4th blender animation and I really like blender man!
I like the part we're the sky is inconssistent af.
This animation took me more then 3 months to make.
not to be mean but this is kind of not that good and i dont know how to tell you to improve considering im not experienced in 3d animation let alone normal animation.
Understood no hard feelings. I understand that I'd say there is plenty of room to grow and improve. Even I can see how extreemly choppy and not well animated this is. But this was only my fourth 3D animation. I'll keep on working hard to get better on this thank you for your critques!
decent choreography i guess is what they say, shot planning?? anyways its alright but the action could definitely be lot more punchier, maybe look up spacing charts for your keyframes. and also have the jumping around move along arcs, i suggest using the grease pencil to plans those out in the camera view
Wow that's a great idea! I must admit it doesn't flow very well. But yeah definetly looking up some keyframes and some more spacing. The grease pencil idea is really brilliant. Oh moving arcs could do very well have them use more of the enviroment.