Just thought I'd post this here... I wanted to make an animated series and wanted to see if i'd just be posting so i can see my story come to life or if people would actually watch what I make... Along with getting critiques on it.

Firstly Yes... the animation has many errors, most of them involving either timing or the textbox... and yes... the story seems bland... but I won't get into much action until the next episode/first season... (hinted at the end)

Secondly... I wanna push through with this series regardless so if you do like it... consider checking out my channel: http://bit.ly/Istudios It has this series along with other one's i'm trying to make so if you like that please consider watching my other videos!

That's all! Hope you enjoyed!