Now I don't know what the most recent version is, but based off of what I saw here, it's a good demo! If I were any more of a degenerate, and wasn't saving money, I might actually throw a buck or two your way as a symbolic endorsement, but I can't, sorry. Still, I enjoyed my 1st playthrough, even managed to succeed with 450 monies left. Even as the costs ramped up rapidly, and I was growing increasingly desperate, I think I was saved by the early realization that investing in the comics is an absolute necessity if I Wanna survive later on. Which is funny, cos at first I was more curious if I can talk to everyone who was interested in that! (because I wanna think I'm wholesome like that)
However, one thing I almost got a little trapped by, is a situation like this: I talked to three guys in a row, and all of them stiffed me, but I thought the game froze because there was no transition when I clicked. Even if it's just like a simple screenwipe that takes half a second, it'd be a nice if subtle bit of visual feedback to the player that stuff is indeed happening.
A suggestion I would make is also adding the Foxtail on the game screen, somehwere on the side or in the background, just chlling and idling, perhaps with her emotions reflecting how comfortable she is with her financial situation. (nervous if she's got the debt coming up and she doesn't have enough money yet) Maybe her eyes could follow the cursor, just as a minor easter egg to make the game and the player feel a little more connected!
While I have my own ideas about features that could be added, and I don't know your plans for the future, I do sincirely hope that you manage to get this game where you desire it! I'm curious to see what the finished product shall be!