This just misses the mark of being great. The art is not very good, the story can be a bit dull, and the battle is basic at the start and then a bit confusing later (tho I really love the card mechanics with Ithara). But it's really interesting that, despite all the issues, I really enjoyed what I played. This game conducts the player really well, there's an intuitive design and flow to the quests. It's one of the most interesting RPG maker games I've ever played on Newgrounds.
I think the game is not great yet, there's much to be improved, but it certainly has potential and you've clearly put a lot of effort into it. Good job!