This is a very weird cartoon. It's mostly just this text going on and on forever. It was too fast to really read it. Yes, I know I could have simply paused. That just isn't what I want to do in a Newgrounds submission. It was interesting how big this was.
I felt like you could have just released this in separate parts. I don't even know how this fits the author comments. It's certainly worth checking out. The animation was fairly good. Wow, was this weird.
The only sugesstion I would have would be to slow down the rate the text changes but just by a bit, I usually read fairly quickly, but at times, I noticed myself looking at the animation a second or so too long and the last line or so of a text box had passed, aside from that interesting utopia story, unique in that the main character was in the end, content with his preformatted life, I did note however the change to color during the last bit representing suzy's potential freedom or what it would have been had she lived, and thought that that was a nice touch.
Your work is so unique and makes you think and I love it! I think I'd better check out everything else you've done..
this is a masterpiece,very original and well realised.the sound is awesome and the white and black graphics create a nice negative atmosphere.so,in conclusion what you are doing is great and i hope you will keep it up :) u have ur own style! :P
This flash reminded me of the book the giver, and who said drugs never did any good. Mien hat is off to you.