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 I have all my animations on my youtube called D.G Animates, all of them will not be posted on here so if you want to see more of them go check them out on my youtube. Hope you will enjoy this one tho!

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not bad... I like how you implemented action more than dialogue, and its abit fast to. This video gives me feels of 2008 or 12, due to it's nostaligc low audio quality and the ol 300 x 300 workspace dimension. Outstanding stuff right there, the effects aren't to bad either. There simple. And the stick figure rig isn't poorly drawn as well, which is a HUge plus if you are wanting to become a better stick figure animator down the line.

tho it is abit sloppy with movements, speed up the fps and work on smoothness a bit more, since you probably started animating i advise you look at people like hyun, Hatena360, pluto, 0gcryp, and even jomn for references, also some music would be good to. More background elements would also be nice as well to make the anims feel alive, also you might want to consider adding in a vcam to spice up things anotch to dynamically give the emotion of action.

Keep up the good stuff man. At least you are on the right path. also please fix that audio quality , and if you don't know how to do that, go to publish settings, go to audio stream and set that baby up to 130k for the best possible sound quality you will ever have in your animation yet!

(i can also provide you with music as well so you won't get your ass copyright strike. Just credit me thats all)

dgshooter responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm starting to practice movements with the v cam and planning to do it with the video I'm working on right now, this animation is a bit old cuz this was on my youtube channel before I got into editing. My new videos have improved audio quality I think. I'll also try to speed up the fps and work on the smoothness for sure! I'll definitely look into those people you suggested and try to add more back round elements to my animations.

sans sans sans sans next plz :O

make red fight sans plz

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Votes
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Score
2.47 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 6, 2020
7:08 AM EDT
Genre
Action