For what you've made it is absolutely a 5/5 perfect ordeal. The thing is you basically copied portions of the original SMBZ and mingled them here seemingly randomly. If you were to have title this something of your own created and swapped out the characters i think you would've won over us audience instead of it seemingly like you were just riding off of another person's work. Your animation skills are PHENOMINAL but I think that's what held you back.