I actually really like this, the build up in the beginning up to the title+music really sets an intriguing tone. I think your art style really shines through here and makes it very nice to look at everything, the humor hit for me. it did feel as though some moments were drawn out a tiny bit too long yet in some areas it definitely complimented the atmosphere of the animation, Only thing that caught me off guard was in one scene where the music was a tiny bit too loud but overall very cool !