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Oxygen episode 1

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This was the first full lenght animation I've ever made that wasn't a gif.

Yeah it looks pretty terrible...

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ok hol up, the way u should tell stories is that everything happens because of something else

Alotta thigns in the didnt have a because they just kinda happned
Man shoots the dude while he plays basket ball doesnt have a reason a behind it nor does the fire wolf thing, and well yknow

animation has alotta potential tho

CutseyWaffle responds:

Ey thanks dude! Yeah you are totally right looking back at this old animation there's a lot because of plot happening.

If I were do redo this one I'll make it flow more naturally. Thank you kindly for you great feedback!

I do like the story so far. The best advice I can give to you is to work on your timing and pacing in animation; some shots go on too long while others are much too short.

CutseyWaffle responds:

Aaahw thank you so much. Yeah definetly the timing is a huge mess. I'll try to pay more attentions to that! Thank you!

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Score
2.80 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 14, 2020
6:36 PM EDT
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