This was the first full lenght animation I've ever made that wasn't a gif.
Yeah it looks pretty terrible...
ok hol up, the way u should tell stories is that everything happens because of something else
Alotta thigns in the didnt have a because they just kinda happned
Man shoots the dude while he plays basket ball doesnt have a reason a behind it nor does the fire wolf thing, and well yknow
animation has alotta potential tho
Ey thanks dude! Yeah you are totally right looking back at this old animation there's a lot because of plot happening.
If I were do redo this one I'll make it flow more naturally. Thank you kindly for you great feedback!
I do like the story so far. The best advice I can give to you is to work on your timing and pacing in animation; some shots go on too long while others are much too short.
Aaahw thank you so much. Yeah definetly the timing is a huge mess. I'll try to pay more attentions to that! Thank you!