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Betty&Jones_Ep4

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Fourth episode of Betty & Jones, a mini web series animated on its own.

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Good job maintaining the style and mass of the turtle. Lots of classic toon personality.
For such a short piece, the action feels a little drawn out. I'd suggest trying to make the moments of high action (slipping the tongue back in the mouth/ hammering the stake/ hitting the cliff) more snappy; Use fewer frames, camera shake and different frame weights to create a sense of impact. it will go a long way in the next episode!

nugolicartoon responds:

Thanks :)