I enjoyed that more than I thought I would. I mean, it has pretty good animation. I didn't like the way you had to advance the dialogue. Yeah, I know that was later used in "TTA" and "Super Mario Bros. Z", but it wasn't as good here. I guess the action needed to be better. Still, some of the animation holds up.
You still haven't made your best series. I appreciate the story. It can be something really good. It's certainly passable. It's even kind of realistic.