hi, i hope my first ever short and crappy cartoon made it in, 3 days in the making so i didn't bother to clean it up. hope ye enjoy!
I liked your idea, but I think it dragged on for a little too long. Ending it shortly after the PTSD scene, which I though was really funny by tue way, would most likely have been better.
Voice actors from the voice acting forum would have been nice, but I think the style was alright with the subtitles.
Other than dragging on a little bit a decent submission.
I like the title and the idea but not this Smooth of the frames. It was better to do it in spurts instead of this.
thank you for the advice!
Your subtitles are too fast. With some voice acting it would be better but i guess you know that.
yea, but i'm no good with voice acting, and i have no mic, but thank you for voting hehe
