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hi, i hope my first ever short and crappy cartoon made it in, 3 days in the making so i didn't bother to clean it up. hope ye enjoy!

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I liked your idea, but I think it dragged on for a little too long. Ending it shortly after the PTSD scene, which I though was really funny by tue way, would most likely have been better.

Voice actors from the voice acting forum would have been nice, but I think the style was alright with the subtitles.

Other than dragging on a little bit a decent submission.

I like the title and the idea but not this Smooth of the frames. It was better to do it in spurts instead of this.

Gerald-G responds:

thank you for the advice!

Your subtitles are too fast. With some voice acting it would be better but i guess you know that.

Gerald-G responds:

yea, but i'm no good with voice acting, and i have no mic, but thank you for voting hehe

Credits & Info

2.84 / 5.00

May 4, 2020
4:04 AM EDT