Duration - 4:37
A man who has a burning passion for hot sauce and many other spices meets his fiery fate when he's told he has kidney stones. Oh no!
This was pretty funny.
I was about to complain about art style, but the longer i watched it the more i liked the art.
The timing was good. Jokes landed perfectly.
As it ended, i felt as if i stopped watching a cartoon halfway through;
Guess that's a good thing since i want another episode.
Near the end, the Doctor's bent arm made me laugh too. 😃
This was actually a pretty funny cartoon! The overall premise was good, and I enjoyed the jokes and easter eggs sprinkled throughout.
My biggest recommendation would be to work on timing. Some shots and jokes were given too much screen time, be it a few frames or a few seconds over, which hurt their delivery. Learn not to hold on these for too long, and the jokes will come through much better.
Overall I really enjoyed it, and I can't wait to see your next one! :)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I'll do my best to improve on the timing on any future animations, really liked your criticism on that subject.
