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the fight of fire and electric PART 2

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Oh man, that icon you used really tricked me into thinking I was about to watch a somewhat good action packed fight.

Instead I was faced with a stickman short. Dont get me wrong, I'm completely fine with the stickman fights, but they need some good action to back them up.

Even if you're a beginner like the animation here suggests you could instantly improve the submission with a simple drawn in background and some sound effects/copyright free music.

Other more complicated things I suggest working on would be some sort of dialogue, even if simple and thrown together, some length to the video so we have a solid minute of viewing, and continuation of improvement on the snoothness of the animation.

Keep on working.

Some audio would be nice, it would also be good if you would distinguish the colours of the blue fella and the electricity, also you should draw a background, even a colour gradient would be good

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Apr 28, 2020
4:58 AM EDT