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Building on what scpgames said, I've got some specific feedback that might help you improve on this game and make it into more of what you're aiming for. For one thing, I think it'd be much better if you had a consistent style of graphics - rather than a combination of flat shapes and things that were obviously pulled off the internet/made in Flame Painter(?), you could use free assets made for game developers, or draw some yourself, or enlist the help of an artist to make your graphics for you. Second, I think the down to move boxes control is a bit strange - I can see why you included it, but I think most players will be able to maneuver better with boxes that move when they push them, as that's what most games do, and therefore people will be used to doing that. I don't see any problem with how the player moves. You've got a really great concept, and I dearly hope you'll keep working on this to make it better. It has the potential to even be a featured game if you do! :D

LucidNightmare responds:

Thank you for this detailed feedback !
This is actually an old project I finished five years ago.

I will definitely restart working on this game, with some help for graphism and animations. I agree with you about the boxes, this is one of the first things that will be fixed :)

Amazing concept, but the graphics and controls make it tricky/boring to play. Polish up the platforms and UX and it's gold. Sound effects would be cool too.

LucidNightmare responds:

Thanks for your feedback. You actually gave me the motivation I needed to revive and improve this project ! I will fix some issues, and someone will help me with graphism. We will also add a storyline to link the five chapters together.

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2.85 / 5.00

Apr 25, 2020
12:32 PM EDT
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