Notbad

Its a good start could use some added sound some more color more smoother animation but as mentioned its a good little start here to the animation process anyways nice little film here.

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could use some added sound some more color more smoother animation

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All so simple ( not at good mean ).
All banality , but interested . You can better :)

Hmm! Animation's not bad, simple but discernible, almost feels like the missing sound is a bigger issue. Even with simple animation you could immerse yourself if it had the latter. Hard to have a script without either subtitles or speech too. Keep it going!

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