The pacing was weird. Some scenes dragged on for too long, others disappeared in a flash. It's hard to know why certain events occur because the artstyle is too lacking. Still I can easly see that you put a lot of effort into this animation and I liked the idea. But what I really hated about this animation was the fact that at 10:47 the snake winks when irl their eyes are closed 24/7 but their eyelids are see-through and that's why they can't "close" any of their eyes: because they are already closed to begin with. And if you mention legless lizards, I'll have you know that irl legless lizards have no fangs so it can't be that either.