Darkness spreads throughout Gotham. Shadow takes ahold of even the kindest souls. Batman is the hero we need in these grim times. On a segway. At a mall. As a mall cop. BATMAN.
Notbad
Well I have to say this is notbad I love the style of art here gave it a sort of artistic element the batman at the start was really nice and unique my only issue with this was it was too short and would have been nice with some added scenes and such, anyways nice little film you created.
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it was too short and would have been nice with some added scenes and such
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I really like the minimalist art design and the absurdity. Where the animation is really lacking is the voice over, and while the sound design is pretty good the levels could be adjusted to make everything feel more cohesive.
It's truly a work of art, even if it isn't my type of humor.
Response: My initial thoughts were both, but watching it again the voice does fit the piece, even if I think that is an area of improvement. I think I hear some signs of some strong denoising, or it could just be the quality of the mic itself.
Noted - I'll work on the audio more. I appreciate the feedback!
What's lacking on the voice over? The voice themselves or the audio quality?
Is this... stop motion? Wouldn't have thought so from the initial animation, but when you zoom out, and the background really looks like a piece of paper... is it just the background? Seems like an unconventional mix of styles if it is, but it works well. Good fun. Good voicing/sound. I can't say it makes me laugh out loud, but does make me smile. Punchline improvement potential, but not bad.
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All Photoshop animation - was trying to go for a UPA coloring style and I find the noise makes it look less digital. Thanks for the feedback cd! Appreciate it.
Fucking Clareece
Right. She needs to get her shit together.