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Bomb's Away (Original version)

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I made this as a final for Digital Character Development class. I was gonna finish it but the designs of the characters and my overall style was improving beyond this. Besides that, now that I'm in Senior Thesis classes, I might as well make a new one entirely from scratch. With elements from this short in it. So, expect to see a new version of this short in May 2021 or so.

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Good idea and decent execution, but it kind of dies on the main character's design, unique as it may be (I can honestly say I've never seen a character design that was just a line with eyes), it kind of blends in a little too well with any background that's not a perfectly solid color.

The animation was kind of choppy too and the abrupt cuts are pretty disorienting, specifically when he fell down the stairs or when he was hit with the fire extinguisher, this has away of taking away the impact and killing the gag.

Overall, I'm happy with the fact that you said you're going to remake it because I see potential for a good short here, and I will be following you for when that remake is complete.

NotaBeethescribbler responds:

I can say that these issues will definitely be fixed in the new version I'm making. I'm sure you can also point out that I made this before I even knew that Adobe Animate had a way to control the camera. That "zoom in" was done automatically and boy, does it show.

Anyway, Thank you for the feedback. Always appreciated.