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Flynnville University #1 - Beer Run

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Everyone I've shown Flynnville to says they love it. I've decided to take a chance and upload it to Newgrounds where I know you guys don't pull punches. If it sucks, blam it and that'll be it.iu_102860_4058299.jpg

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It's not BAD bad but I didn't really like any of the dudes in the cast too much. Didn't really make me laugh. Dusty was kind of hogging up all the attention as a character and you probably intended to make him larger than life so that makes sense. He talks and acts like an extroverted idiot so I think you kind of missed an opportunity to make him do something egregiously hypocritical and stupid after scolding Matt (talking about finding a weed dealer counts but he announced his intentions, instead of them being shown). The owner of the liquor place having a goofy accent I think could have been turned into a joke about how in countries outside the USA the legal drinking age is 18 and not 21. I think I'm being kind of unfair here since you made this 4 years ago but also I don't have a frame of reference for how much you improved upon the cartoons in terms of writing. EDIT: I liked Black Out more. I think if you keep posting, fellers smarter than me will give you all the feedback you'll need.