erm, well, uhmmm, uhhh, ouhmmmm welllllll, it seems you need to touch up the spot somewhere in the animation, ermmm well it could be animated more smoothly and snappy. overall erm i think the mistakes are gonna have to erm, drop the overall score of this animation to, erm about a 4/10 :///////
Man, people sometimes cant even handle one single thought about something, like criticism for example. But for my criticism, I think that this video is well animated and accurate.
Great job! :)