Whats this?? Haylie's posting an....ANIMATION??
Yes finally after years i made something original. Timy, Hunter, and Phil go to a garage sale and buy a few things... Including a dun dun dun SWORD!!!
It's not the best but it's something.
Dont be afraid to give me constructive criticism, i'll need it if i ever wanna animate for a living.
~Credits~
Animation by me
Voices by me
Sound effects by my leg
Sword sound by me
Well, I really liked the facial expressions and the dialogue wasn't bad, but you clearly need a couple more things in the screen for this to work... It's a little TOO minimalistic. Some work with that, but in my opinion, not this case. With bodies, more animation or backgrounds this would be better.
Its supposed to be really simplistic but you're right, it could use more complexity n stuff. It definitely needs more movement i agree with you on that. The dialogue could use work, i worked off a comic i made a year or two ago. Thank you for your comment, this was extremely helpful!
nice
Thank you
Rip That Guy (2020-2020)
Cause of death: Microwave
I would say f in chat, but lets press w instead to move forward from this tragedy