The backgrounds could of been more detailed (buildings could have windows, better drawn clouds etc) The voice acting wasn't that good either - needs improovement. However, it was overall decent, had a story and animation was smooth enough. Good job!
This was the animation I made for my GCSE Moving Image Arts class. I put a lot of hard work into this and I'm really proud of what I've done.
The animation won an award for best GCSE animated film at the Foyle Film Festival and it was one of the most amazing moments of my life. It took a while, but I finally got around to uploading it here. I hope you all like it. Bye.
Repel's Actress: roaming.sonder
Johnny's Actor: Jonathan. D (He doesn't have social media)
Josh's Actor: Me
The backgrounds could of been more detailed (buildings could have windows, better drawn clouds etc) The voice acting wasn't that good either - needs improovement. However, it was overall decent, had a story and animation was smooth enough. Good job!
Thanks. I've been putting a lot more effort into backgrounds, buildings. Etc since making this. Again, thank you for the feedback.