Very good potential
Biome city gives a Society Credit score to its citizens based on their usefulness to society as a whole from 0 to 800. People born without special traits typically have a hard time proving their worth.
This story was inspired by China’s social credit system but with my own twist to it. It’s not very hard to imagine a technological dystopia when a proto-type exists now. I wanted to give each of the three planets humanity lives on, their own unique personality. Maat is where I get to play around with “technology going too far”. I plan to expand upon Earth 2 and Vidar in the future but for now, Wingless Butterfly is the second step in creating this growing universe.
Very good potential
Wow the world building and choices youve made for the visual design really work well together. I love the comicy style of zooming into points of interest and the believable futuristic feel where technology becomes so suppressant. I hope to see more of your writing and well made scenes in the future :). Good VAs too i never had a problem with hearing anyone!
Yay, glad you liked it! I'm working on bringing my other stories to this level of writting next time.