Its very amusing
Well I have to say that this was really good I like the character and old style toon element, Subtitles are always a great addition even you can understand but they are great because its that extra effort and that extra option for the viewers, so try adding some subtitles. just adds abit more to your flash. And so here we come to the end of the review, dont want to drag the review on forever but in a nutshell I found this film entertaining and somewhat amusing, could use a few fixes here and there as explained below, And with this you gave it just the right groove so hope to see more like this, just keep the creative mind moving and creating great submissions.
would be great with some subtitles just as an option.