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Im late on this, however the game is decently fun but I have complaints. The game isn't fully unplayable but not playable to an extent. Every time you jump or walk the screen moves, I wouldn't have a problem with it if it wouldn't break the whole game. So not playable as I said since I only got to collect four coins before jumping shakes the whole screen. I feel like I'm going insane looking at the screen once I jump like five times. I wasn't able to get far, however I feel like this could be a good game if the screen didn't shake so damn much after jumping.

When I get past the 2 spikes the game takes me back to the beginning. I believe there may be some hidden obstacle because I got past it once. If you're going to hide obstacles at least have them reappear after some time so players know when and where to jump. Afterwards when I failed again the screen went completely white with only the control keys showing.

dog crap, you cant even play the damn game

I fell off and got lost, please include a restart button.

Fun idea!

I think if this was finished and polished a bit this could be a good game! I encountered a couple of bugs (including a game breaking error that froze it), and as far as I can see there were only 3 coins to collect?

I like the "things are not what they seem" theme - although I found it hard to jump with the hidden control scheme. You could definitely take it further with blocks that you fall through, maybe even an end of level portal that works in an unexpected way?

I hope you keep working on this - there's some great stuff here already!

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