Obviously this is a practice game / work-in-progress, so I'm not going to address everything - no sense in telling you what you already know. There are two things I want to mention, though.

1. It would be nice to just go straight to the next level instead of getting sent back to the home screen

and 2. platformers where the whole level fits on a single screen need some difficulty to be compelling. This is just basic platforming - it literally took less than a minute to beat because there's no challenge, just basic mechanics.

2.5/5 stars because it's got multiple levels, it functions, and because you're willing to try making games and put yourself out there, and that's a cool thing to do.

Still needs a lot of work, but it's better than original. Wish you luck!

I'm giving you 4 stars out of respect for the amount of work you put into correcting the glitches from the first game and how fast you got it done. You seem to be aware of the inherent weaknesses of these games, you're clearly working hard to learn the craft, and you're listening to the critiques of players. Stick to that path and I have faith that you'll continue to improve.

There's still a glitch that interferes with the "jump" feature when the character is touching a wall, but the worst one, where touching the ceiling cancelled forward momentum seems to have been solved, so great job with that. The game controls much better. In the future, consider tightening up the range of the jump and making it so that the player controls how high he jumps by how long he holds the button. The level design is very simple, but it's fundamentally better than in the last game.

There are also some editorial/spelling errors, but that's negligible at this stage.

Really, keep at it. If you have the passion to excel at this, patience and hard work will get you there.

It's a huge iprovement over your last game, but you could add some enemies, puzzles or unique movement mechanics to make the gameplay a little more interesting, 'cause walking and jumping isn't enough to make your game stand out among other platformers.

A massive improvement to the original