I see you where certainly making an effort, but Good voice acting can carry really stiff animation, but for my own personal uncanny valley, this does not really work.
I feel like you where rushing yourself, and you obviously have a pretty good sense of humor, and understand visual puns, but maybe cut back your scope?
I know that setting deadlines and meeting them is important to pushing yourself as an artist, but what's the point if your overextending and not making something you are proud of?
I am excited to see a more focused project from you, and will look at some of your other work, so please keep trying in a way that will make you happy.
Thank you.