Such a classic :D this one is still one of my faves of yours. But nothing will beat the magic of the brewster coffee one xD
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Such a classic :D this one is still one of my faves of yours. But nothing will beat the magic of the brewster coffee one xD
The animation's a little rough, but, otherwise, pretty fun! Voice acting on Luke was a bit wonky/over-the-top, kind of an inconsistent accent. I liked the dialogue, though, with Layton being pretty damn unsettling, actually. The ending was funny, too. Wasn't really expecting it.
You did well with Layton's face and expressions. The over-the-top faces don't really wok with Luke in my opinion, I feel like it lessens the effect of Layton's dickery when it's supposed to be the heart of the parody's dark humor. I think it's better when the two are contrasted more with Layton being the carefree one making silly faces occasionally.
Overall could use a bit more polish, some more consistency on certain visual details, like the fold on the building Luke hits while falling and his bloody face which is occasionally not bloody at all. I'm sure you'll get better at that stuff with time. The humor isn't outrageously funny, but it's dark and well-timed as well as backed up well by visuals. So keep it up, I'd really like to see more from you!
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Loved it :D