Well, this certainly looks nice, cool animation and style. However, it's really, really short and nothing really happens. I feel like the Movie Portal isn't really for that kind of stuff, more for things that leave you with an experience, but then, you've got 8 other movies, I'm sure you understand. I kinda feel like this could be posted as a GIF in the Art Portal. Also, I feel like you're right, you really squeezed stuff in, it feels pretty disorienting.