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My short film of the animation course I did.
I don't stay as I wanted, for lack of time but at least it is understandable.


Mi corto de fin de año del curso de animacion que hice.
no quedo como queria, por falta de tiempo pero al menos se entiende.


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www.youtube.com/channel/UC7Bw9


www.reddit.com/user/kevintrent


twitter.com/TrentinKevin


www.instagram.com/kevintrentin


www.facebook.com/KevinTrentinA


kevintrentin.tumblr.com/

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Nice animation and pretty fun. The concept wasn't the most original thing ever, but it was executed well. Some really nice camera movements and animation in the first half, but I feel like the second hqlf felt more consistent, cause in the first half there were some pretty jerky and stiff-looking moments. The introduction in particular wasn't great, the thing with the sign looked like it came out of nowhere, because the background was not visible and there was very little build-up to the actual sign. Felt like a pop-up roadblock at the very start of the chase. The humor was nice, though, with the crashing plane you cut from just when we're expecting it to blow up, the ricochet and the ending especially. You have some really nice and punctual comedic timing with the bullet hitting the other robot and some of the cuts, like the one to the pink robot looking after the thief.
Overall, I really like some of the stuff here, but I think maybe you tried to cram too much in when you didn't have enough time to do it, and as a result, it feels like the plot is kinda rushed. Would like to see more from you, though!

KevinTrentin responds:

thanks! Yes, in fact it is exactly what happened, everything went to the rush.
To have an idea this would originally last 3 minutes and even it was going to have a slowmotion.
but I had many difficulties during the project.
hopefully I will do it when I have time.

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Uploaded
Dec 21, 2019
1:28 PM EST
Genre
Action