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Krystal Kaptive

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This took way longer than it should have but it's finally DONE, I'm aware it's not the best but it's also my very first attempt at a scene. Before this I only did like 4/5 loops. Well...

CRITIQUE AHOY.

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It would be better if her leg fell down the drain instead of the key.

noice

Nice work! The animation's really expressive, and the close-ups on the face and feet are very effective.

I must admit the lack of sound threw me off, but no big.
The animation and anatomy are fluid and comprehensible and the expressions are well drawn, the facial work really adds to the body language. The line-work seems a tad rough. And the frame rate you drew doesn't allow for a fluid stop to the motions. But overall, it's quite good.

Next time I'd advise another pass at the line work. Again, quite good for a first attempt!

OddJuice responds:

Thanks a lot, this is the first good criticism I received in a while. It pumps me up to do more!

Good animation, albeit... a little too fetishy for my tastes.

OddJuice responds:

Fetish was definitely behind it all, I can understand if that pushed you off, unfortunately this account is NSFW so everything posted on here will bear the same themes.

It's remarkable that you were able to see past that, judging the animation itself by its quality rather than its content. Any future advice will be greatly appreciated.

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Nov 22, 2019
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  • Daily Feature November 24, 2019