Sorry about the low volume! I'll get it right on the next one :3
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The animation and jokes are really good, but the delivery is kind of lacking at times.
edit: I think they'd work better if you delivered them with a little bit more energy, like with the last joke of the video, "you can't get me arrested", that delivery was great and it was also a great joke.
delivery/delivered doesnt sound like a real word anymore
Thank you for letting me know. Do you have an example of a better delivery for one of the jokes?
EDIT: You've made me very happy. I really appreciate your criticism. My friend and I discussed it later. While some of it will come with practice, I think the mistake I made was drawing everything first and then trying to match the final audio to it. Next vid, The audio will take focus, so I'm not trying to mash things together in the end. Thank you again and I welcome your future contribution. :3