I see your effort, but I can't say I like it. Besides the technical issues of animation itself (which perhaps you should try to improve and make more fluid), the story itself seems a little... I don't know... unintelligible? Cut up? From this short alone we can't really know that the girl lost her voice. Or what she's actually trying to remember or dream (given the fact that it's seems like a dream, that's forgivable). Or why her mind works like a computer. I don't want to be too harsh, because it really shows your effort, but that's just my two cents.
What I do like is the way you used sounds and music. Particularly how we begin to listen the storm when she wakes up. That's really well done. You have a good grasp of how to create an atmosphere and sounds to convey something.
Thank you for the review! Storywise it was meant to be a horroresque nightmare sequence which is why most story elements remain to be explained in other installments. I aimed for too many concepts and lacked the execution to pull them off coherently it seems which appears to be a recurring issue from my last animation. I'm still trying to find the right balance between a comprehensive story and not giving too much away.
This was really good!
wow, phenomenal effort man.
Good Tematic but this need improvements on the motion of the chars and more smooth animation, but Good Work!!!!