I don't really get why the guy didn't do anything to help. The cut from them drinking together to her alone was also pretty sudden and vague, honestly. I just don't get what happened there. The music was fun and I like the style, though you could work on some things, like the guy when he's shown... looking at his watch? The perspective is a bit off and it makes his arms look pretty stubby. The story itself is kinda meh, I guess. It just didn't really connect. The first part, like I said, was confusing, and the second part kinda came out of nowhere and the silly music stopped and it seemed super serious for a moment. Really I think the beginning was what messed it up, cause it didn't feel right and there didn't seem to be a point to it, or there was something missed connecting it to the second half.
Keep it up, but work on visual storytelling and pacing a little, try to show things mkre clearly.