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Super Toodle vs Meteor

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A giant meteor is headed to tiny toodle planet! Oh no who will save them in there hour of need?

My first crack at an animation. Hopefully many more to come. :)

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Seeings as how there are already 78 votes on this animation...
My vote of 5 won't do much, so, i'll 5 it just because! :D
For a first animation, I'd say this is really really good.
Of course, it can't even come close to comparing with someones animation, after they've been doing it for tens of years, but, that's hardly to be expected :P
the overal storyline was fun, and didn't have any major plot holes. light and funny... and I ESPECIALLY LIKED when the thingie pointed and said "Oh Nooooo Its Impending Doommm!!"
XD that's gotta be one of my fav lines in such a scenario. reminds me of Captain Underpants, not gonna lie.
Weell all that being said, I think the audio wasn't on par 100, but that's just something that is able to be refined as time goes on!
Looking forward to seeing more from you!
{review request club official}
- MrM3

jonnywes91 responds:

Wow! Thanks so much! I really appreciate this.

Pretty fun/funny, could have been a little better on the audio and punchline front.
The animation really isn't bad for your first, in fact if someone had shown me this I wouldn't have thought it was someone's first animation. A little bit choppy at points, but that's to be expected. As for the story, it's got the potential to be a good parody of superhero tropes and cutesy toodle planet tropes. However, it just doesn't quite deliver. Cause if it's supposed to be that the toodles are defenseless the logical thing would be for SuperToodle to fail, which he does. But then you make his laser vision powerful enough to break the meteor in two, which kinda undermines the joke. I personally would have gone for a darker ending for full subversion effect. Feels kinda lacking in the end this way. The voice acting for SuperToodle wasn't great but, I mean, you'll get the hang of it probably. Thing is, the "hrrngh" sound is already underwhelming and non-cheery, so the contrasting of the meteor doesn't really work. If you'd had some wacky sound effects or music put in, I think that would have worked better. Otherwise pretty good soundwork for your first animation, I especially loved the meteor's crackling. Keep it up!

jonnywes91 responds:

Wow thanks! That was a detailed and we'll thought response I really appreciate it.

Yah! A real hero, sacrificing himself for the good of eeh...toodlekind? Nicely done. Not really my style of animation, but you got talent nevertheless and the short story, humour and punchline were good enough. Keep it up.

jonnywes91 responds:

Thanks! I really appreciate that.

Credits & Info

Views
541
Votes
76
Score
2.91 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 23, 2019
11:16 PM EDT