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"A bit" is two words not one. As in, "That was a bit tougher than I expected." If you care about that sort of thing you can put it in a word document, or a google drive document, or a webpage to check the spelling and grammar before copying and pasting into the subs from there. Aside from that I thought the intro was too long for the length of the video. Even if later episodes are longer I'd shorten it. I didn't agree with the transitions choices when supplying text in the intro. The part at 0:48-0:51 seems less well done than the rest of the intro. You did a good job making it look like characters were standing on and interacting with background elsewhere, but at this part the background is moving while he's stationary and it's unclear what he's even doing (falling, standing, laying).