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In this episode of Hell-lore, Lith makes her first debut! This hammer wielding female demon is surely a scary one.
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I think your art style is really great, and you have a good grasp of what sound tracks to use to really accentuate the emotion you're trying to make the viewer feel. Definitely stuff that will only get better with time.
I noticed when you had the skeleton giving his monologue about Lith, you had a grunting sound to accompany every word he was saying, just like how they did it in games like Banjo-Kazooie, but I think it would've made the animation a lot more eerie if you had just displayed the dialogue without any sounds with it. If you had instead replaced that with a creepy or eerie soundtrack, I think it would've played off alot better.
The text is annoying to read. It is as pixelated as the animation, which makes it hard to read.
I also feel that you are trying to tell a story with the assumption that it is something that people would automatically understand the significance of the demon and her hammer.
Her hammer? What about her hammer?
The distorted voice thing could be cool, but its quality in this makes it just seem like a cop out.
Keep trying, but I don't think the effort was here.