Good music used : the soundtrack is very beautiful to listen to. Nicely done with the transitions of it for each tone switch. Cool background and character design, great voice acting, clear character roles. Good facial expressions to match each dialogue. A bit glitchy here and there, although that could just be my browser. "you'll just makeus cranky" should have a space. "Clarifyforyou" should have spaces/ "adjust the power and speed outlets-things like that" the and should be removed since it wasn't the limit of the things Kotoha could do. Maybe put "You can manually steer the ship, adjust the power, control the speed outputs" instead to make the dialogue less awkward and more realistic. "Kotoho pouted and dramaticallypushed her twoindex fingers together"
And then I zoomed in the game too much and messed it up. It seems like a cool game with lots of potential for an interesting story, but has typical VN problems. Great work.