Not gonna lie, they had us in the first half. I adore the dramatic voice acting of the father, but I dislike how much the daughter looks and sounds like a boomer interpretation. That and her voice acting sounds kinda off somehow. I guess it's the lack of emphasis and the abrupt ending after the not-so-satisfying "Chill." And, like I said, she's annoying and unlikable and the instant realization that she's that cliche just kinda killed it for me. I don't know, maybe I'm ranting. Great animation though.
Keep it up, try not to end so abruptly and maybe work on the emphasis in voice acting.