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Dearest Olivia...

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A father misses his daughter

More shit on my channel:
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Long Road Ahead by Kevin MacLeod is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution licence (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/...)
Source: http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-...
Artist: http://incompetech.com/

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Not gonna lie, they had us in the first half. I adore the dramatic voice acting of the father, but I dislike how much the daughter looks and sounds like a boomer interpretation. That and her voice acting sounds kinda off somehow. I guess it's the lack of emphasis and the abrupt ending after the not-so-satisfying "Chill." And, like I said, she's annoying and unlikable and the instant realization that she's that cliche just kinda killed it for me. I don't know, maybe I'm ranting. Great animation though.
Keep it up, try not to end so abruptly and maybe work on the emphasis in voice acting.

That really made me laugh hard.

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Aug 4, 2019
1:56 AM EDT
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Comedy - Original
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  • Daily 4th Place August 5, 2019