I felt animation a little bit stiff, specially when characters are talking, it seems that a simple mouth animation is used.
I like the fanservice scenes.
Something that you might want to work on is the composition of your scenes. A little variety could go a long way and you seem to use a lot of full-shots when cowboy-shots or three-quarters might be more appropiate. In general not a fan of the group shots either, the execution of the triangle composition for example is way too cramped and some scenes have to much weight on some sides.