Good thing you wrote a synopsis because frankly I wouldn't know what is that about!
I don't know if you already made the first episode, but I would put more work in the details! I'm not a big fan of blank background!
It was okay I guess! Might make it on newgrounds! Question is do you want the serie to just be on newgrounds or are you aiming higher that that? Because it seem to lack a little bit of effort in it! Maybe the project itself is better than this! We'll see!
Good luck!