Fun but too trope-y and inconsistent for my taste.
There are scenes where you show a stick figure, another where you show a fully featured human hand. There are scenes where they're just stick figures, and another where the have facial close ups. It comes off as off for me.
While I don't mind the over the top nature, I kind of expected it to go all "haha" and self aware with it. The blasted up licensed music playing *all* the time doesn't help either. The inconsistent subtitles and grammar errors cheapen the thing a little. I like my unapologetically shonen fights, but this is like drinking it black. The over the top-ness should be toned down a little, in my opinion. Or at least have a little bit *and I mean a little* self awareness.
There are times where I say that the animation is good, but I feel there's too much of an emphasis on vfx and screen shake, rather than raw animation.
It's enjoyable, but that enjoyment is hampered by what I mentioned above. But I did find it enjoyable over all, so in that, good job.
FIRST I WANT TO THANK YOU I RESPECT EVERY OPINION , THIS ANIMATION I MEAN SOME SCENES WERE MADE BEFORE ONE YEAR AGO AND SOME BEFORE 7 MONTHS I JUST LEFT IT AND I CAME BACK TO FINISH IT AND EDIT IT AND POST IT I HAVE IMPROVED A LOT , AND FOR THE ENGLISH GRAMMAR MISTAKES CAN YOU TELL ME THE MISTAKES PLEASE BECAUSE ENGLISH IS NOT MY MAIN AND I WANT TO KNOW THE MISTAKES. AND FOR THE BODY UPS I MADE IT LIKE THIS BECAUSE IT LOOKS MORE BADASS THE CHARACTER LOOKS HUGE AND BADASS BUT WHEN ANIMATING IT OR THE CAMERA IS FAR I MAKE IT NORMAL .. I WILL DO MY BEST IN PART 4.🌺🌷
That was awesome! I really did like seeing all that action! I thought stick figure animation was dead. The best part was how he was named Eric! Take a guess why I like that name. Wish the same could be said for Doug Walker.
It was weird to hear dialogue at the end. That made it all the more effective! Everything just looked so slick. I regret not seeing the previous installments. I'm new to it!
This is really frickin dope my Boi. I mean what else to say about it either then work more on the combos, because the dragon ballz type inspiration is really making your animation stand out. Like holy cow! And the effects and weapons (O_O) i can't even come up with good effect and weapons myself.
My only thing is that you need to work more on combos *NOTE!* you animate with stick figures so i suggest you really work on them combos Haleem. Now. Making combos isn't a easy task, it might take you a few tries to get one in. But i can count on you that you will accomplish this task. Since your animation is like top quality.
If you need any assist allow me to be your demonstrator, for i have experience stick figure animations myself! Also really trying to collab with people
Yeah I Will Do Combos Next time
This animation Some of it was before 1 year ago and the rest made before 7 months I Just edit it and improved it
Part 4 I Promise it would be more way better and good.
And yeah Why Not We Can Collab together someday 🌹💓