The animation is very old school. The music contributed to that, too. I kinda like it. However, the plot is just incredibly confusing. Completely nonsensical even. We never get clued into where it's gonna go next. Not by the dialogue, not by the setting. I mean, at the start they're in their car and then they're standing in a room. It doesn't make sense and leads to constant confusion. Try telling us somehow where the plot is going and being consistent with the setting or showing us what happened in between scenes. The voice acting is also too emotionless. The dude at the start goes a bit incomprehensible at the next window part (if that's what he says).
Overall this has an interesting atmosphere, and it's surreal, but not in a good way, it just feels like scenes are missing. Try working on that next time. This could be a lot betterm