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My favorite flash ever is called "my favorite class"
In it I learn about seizures and brain melting
[ok]

Ahh. I was half-expecting some sort of twist somewhere… but it didn't happen. Even though it's kinda artsy and an interesting idea, it doesn't try to connect and develop all the descriptions into something "more" (unless I missed it).

I'm also not sure whether this qualifies as a game; the outcome/progression is always the same, so it feels more like a "slideshow" and would probably be better off as an interactive movie.

The blinking is eye-bleeding. Not only they have bad colors, but they're too fast.
“I don't know how to play this game called Geometry” - Is that a reference to Geometry Dash?

Art Class also blinks the background, in all three primary colors (blue, red and green), and even if not frequent, the blinks are fast, which is not nice to my eyes either. If they blinked slower, preferably in similar shades (blue -> cyan -> aqua green -> green, without the jump), it would be better.

The texts seems very random, and without a real purpose. In several places you repeat yourself (eg. “I miss my brother” and then “I miss my brother”). Self-repeat is a resource dialog writers have to say “this piece of information is important”, but...

I thought it would end up having a quizz or something, but it doesn't. Therefore, it probably is not a game, but rather, an interactive movie.

And thus, the self-repeat in some parts is not actually good.

The sound seems to be produced by a kid, but so are the drawings - which is OK, internally consistent, but the blinking is awful, which along the lack of a objective/a game, is the main reason for my rating.
I'm sure this can yet be improved in many ways.

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Jun 11, 2019
6:37 PM EDT
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Simulation - Other